The Diary of a Countryside Lady on 20.5.2010 @ 11.30

Traversing

a little known path today,

on my own

- well - in point of fact

accompanied with a lone,

drone

of a female,

[dull brown]

blackbird.

She of little renown.

Mind full of rhymes & versing,

rehearsing 

some performance poetry.

Twasn't absurd,

I love the solitude

which doth often so elude

a work orientated

populace.

Employment 'tis surely over-rated.

I peruse

as I fuse

the stoppered-up [as yet] words,

& muse

cold

as I meander.

Shame, the old,

untold

number of houses go.

Flattened!

Now grown o'er with newly cut grass - gone to seed

or the occasional couch-grass weed!

But the walkways still remain.

and blackbirds - fattened

on the well fed worms,

which now squirms

out of the heat!

Dandelion clocks

slowly rocks,

blow lazy

in the hazy

sun - gentle touch on the cheek like satin,

this Spring matin.

Sudden came upon the memorial stone

dedicated to Craig -Millar

the baby boy,

who brought no joy

to his mother,

but some [anonymous] others.

I was sore mistaken

gazing in this baking

Mayday heat,

Incorrect thought

he lived on

as he ought,

yet now discover he's long gone,

anon.

A decade since.

The knife of fate

doth fall

for no rhyme,reason nor call.

Yet he's not forgotten,e'en whence,

thence

encumbered with a rotten outlook,

in his shortened lifespan 

of pain & strife.

Never grown now to be a man.

So as I knelt,

keenly felt

I ought to compose

this li'l bitty

of a ditty

& rhyme

for all @ s1 Craigmillar

to take time

out to remember Craig Millar. 

Copyright held @ AMC2010


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